Conrad Rice

This was a very beautiful piece. You have wonderful powers of description here. I can't help but wonder if it would be better served as a poem perhaps? If you ...

Wonderful, lyrical poetry Your word power is astounding. I love the images you conjure up with each new stanza. I love it a lot.

For a bit of explanation, this was written as a sort of alien invasion on a typical American street kind of thing. I tried to keep some stuff deliberately vague, ...

I had to keep it brief. It was for a contest and it had to be under 750 words.

I liked that story. It was very well written and I can honestly say that it touched me. You really have a talent. There were a few minor grammatical errors ...

Very well written story. I liked the way you set everything up and the unexpected twist at the end. You have very good powers of description. All in all, a ...

very interesting. I never really understood if the character was crazy or not, though that may have been intentional on your part. It's a very nice piece of work. With ...

Very interesting piece of work here. I like the way it progresses at just the right pace. The innocence of a child's imagination is captured perfectly. All in all, a ...

This is good. The internal conflict is really evident and very well done and it contributes towards this work very well. This character appears to be very real and that ...

I liked the way everything clicked together in this story. It all rolled together so very nicely. Major kudos from me. What happens next?

Aww! I loved this story! You portrayed everything so simply, exactly the way that is should be with little children. I really liked your characters and felt really attached to ...

Ha ha, I can't stand that song either. All in all, this was very hilarious. I love the term ,'biased hat.' I have never heard it before, and I adore ...

I really like how you draw the comparisons between dealing with a relationship and painting a picture. You do it with such fantastic realism and imagery, and I absolutely adore ...

Since so many people are bringing this up, I have to comment about it. The reason the butterfly has a skull on it is because I wanted to convey the ...

I have to agree with everyone else who's posted. Very passionate. I can tell you feel very strongly about this. Bravo.